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Message: RE: What we do know.

RE: What we do know.

posted on Jan 12, 2005 06:08AM
EDIG is allegedly making money, definitely hiring new engineers, and the meetings at CES, which may or may not have been actually held, were, assuming the former, possibly sucessful, depending upon one`s definition of success.

This is an example of poor sentence structure caused by overuse of phrases, resulting in confusion on the part of the reader. The readers` barriers to comprehension are compounded by imprecise verb selection and misspelling or typographical error.

Short, declarative sentences are always helpful.

Edig has reported the company is making money and hiring new engineers. The company planned to hold meetings with prospective customers during CES. This is reminiscent of the previous 6 CES events.

Wolfy

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